This is the third vodcast in which we discuss the Mise en Scene, Target Audience and The Genre for our film opening. Apologies for the camera angle not being perfect at times and cutting Asa off at certain moments. Click on the link to the BBFC 15 rating guidelines as we said in the video.
Introduction
Welcome to the blog of Rasam Productions and Full Throttle Distributions Sam Pollock (The Director) charting the evolution of the opening to the new feature film "Wrenched" jointly produced with Rob Shaw (The Producer) and Asa Newmarch (The Cinematographer). You'll be able to see the final cut on my YouTube channel as well as various short videos and vodcasts/podcasts right here on this blog! Enjoy and please feel free to comment/add suggestions!
Saturday, 29 January 2011
ALL - Podcast Number 3: Feedback
This is our third podcast which is about the feedback we have recieved from our footage and company idents and what we have done to make changes to them.
RS - Company Ident Feedback
I uploaded our Ident Draft to Youtube and then onto Facebook to get some feedback on it. After reading the comments we have decided to have a brainstorm of fonts and to try and choose the one that we think works the best. I will then re-upload the draft with the new font and post to Facebook again to see if it gets the same/similar comments or if their opinion has changed. We will also think about making different to the Doctor Who opening so it will make our Ident unique.
Click on the image below to see feedback on our Ident Draft
SP - Second Company Ident
Here is the second of our Distribution Company Ident "Rasam Productions". I created this using the Mac computers at school on software called Livetype and then sound was added using Imovie. I added a few sound effects to the Ident to make it a bit more interesting and to fit in with the text moving towards the screen.
SP - First Company Ident
Here is the first draft of our Distribution Company Ident "Rasam Productions". I created this using the Mac computers at school on software called Livetype. However it is only our first draft so it has not got any sound on it yet.
RS - Rough Cut Feedback
Here is evidence of feedback we recieved on the Rough Cut. I uploaded the rough cut to Youtube and then to Facebook for feedback on it. After discussing the feedback we have decided to re-take a few shots, such as making sure the car is still in the drive at the end of the film! (we moved the car after a while and didn't remember to move it back). Re-take the shot when the girl turns around to find her boyfriend because of the lighting not being good enough. Create some coverage by taking a CU of the article in the newspaper therefore the audience know why the man has gone to the house in the first place (we got feedback saying it was unclear why he had gone). And we will consider slowing the footage down slightly because Olivia's (the girl in the film) movements seemed slower than the males in the footage so it seemed a little odd. We would have to consider how much time we have left for the 2:30 limit and come up with a solution.
Click on the picture below to see feedback on our rough cut
Click on the picture below to see feedback on our rough cut
ALL - Rough Cut
Here is a rough cut of our coursework idea. We have not added sound effects or the soundtrack yet so it is not quite finished. I have just uploaded the clip to Youtube and then Facebook so we can recieve feedback on it. We have already noticed a few floors to the footage like some of the lighting in some shots is not ideal, the shot/reverse shot is not quite right and a couple of shots are too shakey and they require a tripod instead. We will be re-shooting a few shots later in the week to solve this issue.
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