In this video we showed our rough cut to the class. We then asked for feedback on the whole rough cut and they gave us ideas of how to improve it. The camera seems to have cut random bits of the footage resulting in little bits being cut out, therefore not running smoothly throughout. The footage is also filmed without a tripod so can be very shakey at times. After recieving the feedback we have taken the film opening apart and thought of new ways to convey our narrative a bit better.