We have mainly only made changes to the end of our opening
A man is looking for a car in a newspaper
When he finds one he circles the address and details of the people who are selling it
Then rips out the page and travels to the house by car.
Meanwhile a teenage girl home alone and she is talking to her boyfriend on her phone when she hears a knock at the door.
After a brief conversation she invites him in and then goes up stairs to get changed.
The mysterious man follows her upstairs and walks into a room he thought she went in only to find no one there.
He looks around the room and in a chest of drawers
Then rips out the page and travels to the house by car.
Meanwhile a teenage girl home alone and she is talking to her boyfriend on her phone when she hears a knock at the door.
After a brief conversation she invites him in and then goes up stairs to get changed.
The mysterious man follows her upstairs and walks into a room he thought she went in only to find no one there.
He looks around the room and in a chest of drawers
As he opens the draw we see a hooded figure standing behind him
POV shot of the murderer with the knife and stabbing his victim
The camera cuts to outside when we hear a girl screaming.
It then cuts again inside the house where there is a hand on the girls shoulder and when she turns around it is her boyfriend.
The camera cuts to outside when we hear a girl screaming.
It then cuts again inside the house where there is a hand on the girls shoulder and when she turns around it is her boyfriend.
After a conversation they decide to go upstairs to the bedroom
We see a shot of the "dead" man lying on the floor and background noise of the pair running up the stairs
Extreme close up of the "dead" mans eyes opening
The last shot is the man who was suppose to be dead sitting up when the scrren blacks out
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