RS - Rough Cut Feedback

Here is evidence of feedback we recieved on the Rough Cut. I uploaded the rough cut to Youtube and then to Facebook for feedback on it. After discussing the feedback we have decided to re-take a few shots, such as making sure the car is still in the drive at the end of the film! (we moved the car after a while and didn't remember to move it back). Re-take the shot when the girl turns around to find her boyfriend because of the lighting not being good enough. Create some coverage by taking a CU of the article in the newspaper therefore the audience know why the man has gone to the house in the first place (we got feedback saying it was unclear why he had gone). And we will consider slowing the footage down slightly because Olivia's (the girl in the film) movements seemed slower than the males in the footage so it seemed a little odd. We would have to consider how much time we have left for the 2:30 limit and come up with a solution.

Click on the picture below to see feedback on our rough cut